I really liked it and you had some great ideas in it. I do think that the art could have been better. At times the body proportions were really off and then sometimes they were dead on. I think that a little more time developing the characters look might have helped as well. The animation was stiff and jerky but there were points in where there were some good expressions but I feel that you were being a little timid. Don't be afraid to exaggerate movements and facial expressions. I also commend you on taking such a huge project but I would love to see this revised once your skills have been polished up a bit.
Hope that helps.
Short and cute and it looked nice.
That is just awesome can't wait to find out what happens.
I laughed almost through the entire thing. The only thing that I didn't like was him frenching his dead Dad's head, that was just disturbing. Can't wait to see more.
lol sorry :P
glad you enjoyed it tho :)
Very cute and I like the timing with the music and the animation. I think the beginning was a a little stiff as far as dialog goes but it gets better as the story progresses.
It was nice
however I found the ending rather disappointing. I was half expecting her to lay down into him, beat him up or something. It was a bit of a let down. The animation does go with the beat well but now I have an urge to play Tetris.
Takes me back
Some funny stuff there.
character design. I like the voice work and the script wasn't to bad.
Full of win
I really enjoyed this a lot. I was ROFLING actually. I too remember the old carrage NESs and remember how I was jealous of the Japanese Nintendos, I think they were called Famacon or something. Anyways those things were build like solid were you just stuck them in like an Atari system.
Funny thing though I remembered going through similar rituals with the first PlayStation systems as well.
Great Idea but needs more
The designs and animation were all very well done and I like the concept very much but I think that the story could have been pushed more like the old time Autobots getting in a fight with an old time Decepticon but in a old time civil manner like a gun duel or something or the wierd form of boxing they use to do.
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