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Great story

I really liked it and you had some great ideas in it. I do think that the art could have been better. At times the body proportions were really off and then sometimes they were dead on. I think that a little more time developing the characters look might have helped as well. The animation was stiff and jerky but there were points in where there were some good expressions but I feel that you were being a little timid. Don't be afraid to exaggerate movements and facial expressions. I also commend you on taking such a huge project but I would love to see this revised once your skills have been polished up a bit.

Hope that helps.

Short

Short and cute and it looked nice.

Dude

That is just awesome can't wait to find out what happens.

Very Awesome

I laughed almost through the entire thing. The only thing that I didn't like was him frenching his dead Dad's head, that was just disturbing. Can't wait to see more.

Jazza responds:

lol sorry :P
glad you enjoyed it tho :)

Very Fun

Very cute and I like the timing with the music and the animation. I think the beginning was a a little stiff as far as dialog goes but it gets better as the story progresses.

It was nice

however I found the ending rather disappointing. I was half expecting her to lay down into him, beat him up or something. It was a bit of a let down. The animation does go with the beat well but now I have an urge to play Tetris.

Takes me back

Some funny stuff there.

Interesting....

character design. I like the voice work and the script wasn't to bad.

Full of win

I really enjoyed this a lot. I was ROFLING actually. I too remember the old carrage NESs and remember how I was jealous of the Japanese Nintendos, I think they were called Famacon or something. Anyways those things were build like solid were you just stuck them in like an Atari system.

Funny thing though I remembered going through similar rituals with the first PlayStation systems as well.

Great Idea but needs more

The designs and animation were all very well done and I like the concept very much but I think that the story could have been pushed more like the old time Autobots getting in a fight with an old time Decepticon but in a old time civil manner like a gun duel or something or the wierd form of boxing they use to do.

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