ItoSaithWebb's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Water Dragon]

Very Well painted

Nice texture and dragon design and the values work well but you have some major tangents happening with the dragon's mouth and both the mountains and shore line.

[new arm]

Sassy

I like the pose and character design, although I think he legs may be to small or short proportionately. I think you could push the rendering more though.

Jetkid responds:

thanks for the constructive critism!

[Bloody Anne]

Very well done.

Great composition and the detail and colors are working really well. The only thing that seems off to me is the helm, I think the back of it is showing to much and it is making feel off.

AlvinHew responds:

I fixed it just for you, buddy. =)

[Venison]

Interesting

and very cool as a Logo. It has a retro and modern feel to it. I could easily see this on a skateboard.

[Curly Howard]

A good likeness

and you have the start of some good values although they tend to get to bright on his face so the value range could be a little broader. While you did catch his features and expression rather well the proportions of his face are very distorted.

Keep working at it though and you'll get there.

[Corrupt Aura]

Very Cool

Interesting composition, I love all the detail and action that is going on with this piece. The only thing that I think that could have been done a little better is to have bumped the contrast some.

[guide]

Very Cool

I really like this a lot and you put a lot of work into it. The only thing that I think you could have done to make this even better would have to varied the textures just a bit on the demon.

sucho responds:

yea, that would have changed the flavour i was going for though. i was so fed up with the monochrome that i didnt get to sharpen him the way i wanted, otherwise the design is pretty much what i had spot on. ah well.

[Garruk Wildspeaker]

Not bad but could have been better

I know that you didn't plan a BG but I think that the BG could have used a little more thought put into it. The pose is good although I think the forward arm may be a little short and stiff. Pallet wise I like what you have chosen and there is a good silhouette. The rendering is not to bad but it feels like you used only a soft edge brush for almost the whole thing. It is better to use both hard, soft and textured. Mix it up a bit where you think it might need it, trust your gut in that area.

Nekow responds:

thanks for the tips, but I said that it was one of my first pieces I did on pc, so I didn't expected perfection

[Niddhogs head]

Very cool

I like what I see here but I think you could have pushed it a lot more. I would suggest pushing your value range a little more and perhaps changing the lighting in such a way that it draws out eyes more to Niddhog. There is one thing that bugs me though and that is his right hand side antler which feels like it is tilted at the same angle as the other antler and I think it would feel better titled the other direction, put some perspective on it.

Still awesome stuff here.

[the annelidian rifleman!]

Very Fun

Very Fun concept,

jouste responds:

great!

fun is a really important attribute for me to convey in my pictures so i'm glad you felt that way.